Friday 14 December 2012

Kennedy Grove 2nd Draft



Changes made:

  • Re filmed scenes with a lot of background noise
  • Filmed more scenes to make the storyline more understandable
  • The part where the music kicked in didn't match the build up of tension so I moved it back to the part where I felt it fitted

4 comments:

  1. I think the order is great and the music works well with the transitions.

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  2. Good trailer! On the text scene I think you should slow it down so the audience can read it fully and understand what is going on. Also, on the scenes with no dialogue I think you should reduce the volume so the background noise doesnt over ride the soundtrack. I think your music works great with your transitions and edits - your thought beats are very good!

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  3. transitions work really well and the structure is great. the E4 title card at the beginning is a good idea. i'd suggest turning up the volume when stephen's in the library its a bit quiet.

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  4. your music fits in with the theme of the trailer its really intence and draws the audience in probably just put a few fast cuts in there to make it more intence and speed up the pace

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